Baptism unto life?

It's good to read something like this, someone honestly pouring their soul out to God. It encourages me deeply.

"Thou hast given me the heritage of them that fear Thy name."

wow... This is very beautiful. It sounds like you went through quite the experience.

I could hear the rythum (Is that how you spell it?...) very well.

I love this.

I adore this poem. Honestly, I can't even say how much I adore this poem. =) One of the best, I think.

A very emotional and encompassing poem. A couple of times your rhymthm was inturrupted by one of your lines being too long ("God, I found You in the water; I was cleaned"). The first little verse ("I call upon the Spirit") didn't work out as well poetically as the rest, but the poem did warm up as it went on. I don't know why you have the echoes in paranthasese - is it to make it like a song? I have seen that format before, and it always disturbs the emotional flow of the piece for me. But that's just a personal quirk, of course so don't mind me!

Great imagery. A beautiful religious peice. Best luck!