Hm... cute?

I rather like deeper poems. Ones with something you can't quite grasp, but it is a powerful presence behind a brick wall of words.

This was... cute. Simple. Lovesick. Yeah, a little.

I also have bad moments of cutesieness, so don't worry.

Perhaps try to find a subject even more personal that a love. Something the dredges up pain and conflict. Oh, those are the juicy poems. Yummy.

~Stormy

Oh wow! I love it so much. You took my feelings and put it in words. Amazing. (PS - your welcome for the reveiw and thank-you for that)

Very impressive Dreá!Besides the fact that I love what it says, it's true rhyme!

Awsome

*sigh* so true

Exactly. Thats my problem too. I just don't know where to start :(I really connect with this poem (as usual :P)

-Vanessa