Reviews for Love in the City - FictionPress.com

poet tree 2005-08-09 ch 1,	abuseThe repetition of 'down here in the city' really adds to this piece. I like it. (I know I say that on almost all of my reviews, but what can I say, it's true.) The way you describe the monotony and unfaithfulness of the city is perfect. A side note-On Shock Me, you asked if I've ever tried S&M personally. I have, but only once.
dark88poet 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseVery well written and filled with such depth. I also loved how it came full circle with the last line Down here in the city. dark88poet
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseA very in-depth read with thorough detail and imagery.
pneumothorax 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseParts were good; '“I love you. Can you get the keys?' I liked. Alot of it seems personal and almost leaves you out - the 'Down here in the city?”' part. Interesting how the speaker has picked up on parts of the character that people tend to do when they're thoroughly sick of them: 'Your voice is always tripe and bland'. It's obviously true love my dear.