Wow this is really amazing! It sounds so conflicting. It really applies to life, through the conflict of what makes you happy can make you frustrated or feeling two things at once. I really feel a lot through reading this poem!

nice poem...love the emotion-gone-

great job! personal though, I think the title should be Unmissable and Unwatchable, but maybe thats just me..i found those to be the strongest lines in the poem...but great poem! i noticed that you use the word "sparks" in almost every poem...interesting, very interesting...

This ones cool. You can see one view, but in another, it's like watching fire works in your mind. You can't miss them, but can't watch them. They can put you in awe, or in confusion. It damages your life, and hope, dew to lack of water to prevent the flames spreading through your mind.

The fact that you categorized this poem as "supernatural" makes me wonder what it is that is "Unmissible/unwatchable" and is "Just there/next to me/Can I let it go/Or stop?" And maybe this is the point, but the poem has no real answer to these questions. A lot of depth here; it's also a very personal poem, I would say, in that the questions posed in the piece are not questions for the greater man or world as a whole, but they are for answers for an individual. I really like this one.

Its mystical, but it kinda left me confused in that, what is the actual 'unmissable, unwatchable' thing?