Your work really entrances me... it always manages to portray the joy amidst the sorrow... This one is an excellent length and simply written.

wow! This poem may be simple but its so deep and i liked it. Good job.

The poem in itself is really simple, and yet it manages to capture emotions, using colors. I don't really know how to exlain it, it's just..there.

I've written something pretty similar to this once, but haven't had the chance to post it yet. Though I must say yours is better. _

First, thankyou so much for your review! That was my first one and I am so glad someone liked it.

I loved The Colours of my Life because it was so simple but really effective. It's impossible not to like. Good job!

woa, that was..deep...swet :) great job :D

The format worked VERY well with this evocative piece. The minimalist approach took me by surprise, but the sparse lines contain a wealth of emotion. I cannot really describe what I felt when I read this several times, but just the final paint on the canvas caught me: "Light and water/The colours of my life". Wonderful work on this.

Hey there, thanks for the reviews! Wow, I loved your poem. It painted an imaginative picture...keep writing!

Hey, Good Job. I really liked it.

P. thanks for being the first one to review my poem. . Oh, and I also fixed that little mistake. Thanks again.

That's cool; i like the fact that it revolves around the colours, andit goies through peace (the meadows) and pain and betrayal, and you didn't give up the rhyming; nice job!

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Rich in imagery. I love the idea behind this. Absolutely marvelous! *adds to favorites* Keep up the fantastic work.

You have very good imagery in this poem. Keep up the good work and keep writing!

PS - Thanks for the review

Wow, this is a really vivid poem, full of imagery, I really liked it

ps thanks for the good review :-)

The imagery you set is excellent. The way you associate the colours with different aspects of life is interesting and they all fit. Well done. I quite like it.