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| Carmel March 2007-07-26 ch 42,  | abuseThis is a truly wonderful story. Your descriptions are fantastic, and let the reader see into the world you've created. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps the reader interested throughout the entire read. Like I said, truly wonderful. Good job on this :) ~carm~ |
| Tempest116 2007-07-22 ch 42, | abuseThat was an excellent story. I loved every bit of it. I can't wait to read the second part of the trilogy. |
| 5starmom 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat start! ... on to Chapter 1 =) P.S. CAN NOT believe there aren't more reviews!! |
| whateva123 2006-12-30 ch 42, | abusehey the story is very nice.do update ur other story lies in the blood:deception.cant wait to read it. |
| sunflowersing 2006-12-30 ch 42, anon. | abuseThat was EXCELLENT! I cant believe it! You should really get this thing published! No joke. Damn. That was the best vamp story since Nora Roberts with her Morrigons Cross trilogy! Great job! sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2006-12-29 ch 25, | abuseNo! There is no hope for humanity! Will there be the end, which seems so near. I am crying right now, and I fear I feel an emptyness falling upon my soul. Why?!?! no hope. no hope. no hope. no hope. sunflowersing *tear drop* |
| sunflowersing 2006-12-29 ch 16, | abuseExcellent! It feels like we are getting to some problems. Keeps me reading. A few typos: Mathias reached over to the door knob as she walked to it, and opened the door for you. (you should be 'her') Very professional writing style. Keeps the reading thinking, and lets me know you put a lot of thought into what you wrote, instead of just typing and posting. You beefed up the story, keeping it enthralling to the reader. sunflowersing |
| Spirit of the Sky 2006-05-11 ch 42, | abuseI absoloutly love this! Everything is so in-depth, and the characters are so lifelike. It's just...wow... I can't even describe how impressed I am! I hope you begin work on the next part soon! Until then I will be waiting impatiently to see what happens next. TTFN Spirit of the Sky |
| jikap 2006-05-08 ch 42, | abusei liked it, very much.kind of a let-down when i realized that "completed" meant just book one in a triology, and not the whole story... didn't really find that out until the end... i hate cliffhangers :p it doesn't really seem like your gonna start book two anytime soon does it?damn... |
| DG 2006-03-26 ch 42, anon. | abuseThis story was so awesome I was hooked. I can't wait till you come out with the second part to the trilogy |
| hello 2006-01-28 ch 42, anon. | abuseomfg! how come you dont have thousands of reviews?!this story is so freakin good i read the whole thing in just a day!i loved it!Keep up the fantabulus work! |
| Flech The Werewolf 2005-12-04 ch 7, | abuseI am really starting to hate little miss bitchy. (kraig) Reading on. P.S. could you take a look at my fantasy storie please? if thats okay. |
| Flech The Werewolf 2005-12-04 ch 6, | abuseWondering what will happen next... I'll read on. Sorry about the delay on this review. |
| Flech The Werewolf 2005-11-19 ch 4, | abuseVery good, very god, i'll read on believe me! =) |
| Ivory24 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseCool story! |