|Reviews for showers|
| Cyssel 9/6/05 . chapter 1
I loved the imagery brought out in this poem. Enjoyed the lines like 'tiny greens in murmurs', 'whispers of laughing whims' and 'a spectrum's symphony, an eternity of life' the most. The ending was crisp and impactful.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/30/05 . chapter 1
A whispering of the heart sends cascades of emotion. Truly wonderful.
| rei 7/30/05 . chapter 1
pretty! and so deep i cannot understand. like what is pyrrhic. aah.
| Archipelago 7/29/05 . chapter 1
very pretty love that first stanza
| negligible fictional force 7/29/05 . chapter 1
y'know, you have this thing for imagery. like this mad talent for it. this is so damn beautiful, honey. i might hate you.
| omi 7/29/05 . chapter 1