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| Cyssel 2005-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the imagery brought out in this poem. Enjoyed the lines like 'tiny greens in murmurs', 'whispers of laughing whims' and 'a spectrum's symphony, an eternity of life' the most. The ending was crisp and impactful. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuseA whispering of the heart sends cascades of emotion. Truly wonderful. |
| rei 2005-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abusepretty! and so deep i cannot understand. like what is pyrrhic. aah. |
| Archipelago 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abusevery pretty love that first stanza |
| negligible fictional force 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abusey'know, you have this thing for imagery. like this mad talent for it. this is so damn beautiful, honey. i might hate you. |
| omi 2005-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful. |