|Reviews for Heaven|
| Oracle of Destiny 3/28/08 . chapter 1
True. Heaven is open for everyone including those who have sinned.
| Silver Elementalist 2/20/07 . chapter 1
O_O... *cough* -looks at doctor- Gender change please!
Lol, I don't believe in Heaven either, but I DO believe that when you die, you experience absolute peace, and learn that only a few things matter.
Undersanding, and endless love. :) So hop up, and be happy! XD But nice Haiku, no matter how scary.
| Glittering Innocence 1/16/06 . chapter 1
good job :)
| chibicherrychan 12/29/05 . chapter 1
Men kill and ravish women, huh? That's one dark world you live in. I'm not sure you need such violence to prove heaven doesn't exist but alright... that's one way to see things.
| Orion Demasecus 10/7/05 . chapter 1
It's direct and subtle at the same time. Pretty cool.
| CerriC 8/25/05 . chapter 1
I just wanted to let you know, some guy on the TV just said "parenteral digestion". Yeah, like the macrophages. *grins*
Oh, nice haiku too. Actually, I've never been a fan of haikus. Interesting, though.
| KangarooJack 8/6/05 . chapter 1
You know I like Haikus I can see you like them too,good job,quite nice
| Cyle 8/2/05 . chapter 1
Hmm, this is a good poem about what people of the past have made Heaven out to be.
And as everyone else said: very dark. )
I like it D.
| Ellin Louise 7/31/05 . chapter 1
Intresting poem... well writen.
| k 7/31/05 . chapter 1
its so disgusting the way in which the darkness is woven,but a wonderful observation.
| Autumn-Flowers 7/30/05 . chapter 1
:(I am a bit mixed up about heaven.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/30/05 . chapter 1
I am a little confused by the contradictions, but it is intriguing.
| liz anya 7/29/05 . chapter 1
| M.L 7/29/05 . chapter 1
have you seen those ancient paintings of heaven,with swords in the hands of men and blood on their lips,naked women being ravished all over the pictures? so true,so true.