:) Hehe reading the fight with Celes and Jenna, a person would almost forget that they're pregnant. and... OMG IT'S SARAH AND ROBERT! AH!

I love this story so far!


~Black and White Dreams~

:D That was great! I love this story!

I saw a few words that you didn't put a space between... you did that a few times, but otherwise, great job with that chapter :)

~Black and White Dreams~

0.0 the ending surprised me. I didn't think Jenna would be with Lucifer on this... It's kinda scary, actually... This is great! It's really interesting.

~Black and White Dreams~

This is really good! It's really lifelike. It's funny reading it though, because I live in Lawrence, about an hour, hour and a half, away from Boston. Great job so far.

~Black and White Dreams~

0.0 omg I love this! Really great so far, it caught my attention right away. I really love stories like these, and was trying to write one of my own, but I kinda lost a little intrest, after working on it since October...

Sorry to hear about your story being destroyed in the fire... That's horrible. I would be devastated if that happened to me.

Btw, I told ya I would get to you soon ^^

~Black and White Dreams

I was gonna write one just like this one, but I'm glad I didn't because I might not have come across this one, because you reviewed mine, adn if your as confused as I am...great!Luv it, September Mist!

ACK!! BAD JENNA!! BAD JENNA!

Anywho, this is a great story so far, love the yin/yang thing ya got going on, the only CC i have is you might want to break up your dialogue with actions or desc. because soon youll fall into the habit of making it almost pure diolaugue (trust me) Keep going!!