Oooooo, sad... Very well written too. Glad it's not about you. Emerald Dragon on ALR's pen name

Fathers can be mean, self-serving jerks sometimes. I wish I had the courage to say that bit about it being his problem to my dad.

That was good too!

Too many of my friends have to go through that too and it has to be pretty painful.

Wow. This is really, really good! I really identify with it. Well, Mamo-chan says thanks for the review! Bye, and feel free to check up on us anytime... Hehehe.

wow. that was really good. lots of pent-up anger. it tends to make great poetry, as you have expressed here. i'd love to hear that to music.

Sad baut, oh, so true. Good work.

This is a good poem, and it accurately reflects the feelings of a child abandoned by a father. Don't forget to forgive and forget, however hard it may be. Nice job, continue your work!

Wow, very interesting. I enjoyed.

Wow, that's really sweet. A good angsty poem, lots of feeling, and some powerful words. Yeah, I think I know some people like that. Or at least it feels like I do.

(smiles) Wonderful, heartfelt poem. (grins) oh, i figured this was the best way to pay you back. It's very emotional, and quite enjoyable! _

This is really good, but it reminds me more of a poem. A song needs a chorus. but otherwise fantastic job

Rock on, girl.

wow...that was awesome. I'm glad I'm not the one you wrote that to. I wish you the best in your writing and your relationship with your dad. Thanks for writing a review. So, here's one for you.

Really sad poem ... raw passion. I do hope you forgive your father & make peace before he dies. Great poem.