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| Joyful Song 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseAw... a very sad story. It made me think about others, which was probably the intent of the story. Good job. |
| luv me like no other 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseawesome oneshot. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww. i wanna cry now. god some ppl are too caught with their own drama that they dont realize theres someone else who's got bigger problems. anyway, i really loved this. it was beautiful. |
| Crewger 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseaw *sniff |
| caz15th 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI'm crying...give me a second. Ok...I'm ok now. That was so beautiful...a bit like the match stick girl, but still...it was just...god. Nothing, at least not a story, has made me cry in a long time. Your writing style is astounding...I'm not sure if I reviewed WereCAT or not. I liked that as well, it made me laugh. But this...you have some AWESOME talent. To make people laugh, and then to make them cry. God...yeah, I loved this. Keep it up. If you do anything like this again, email me with it? I love it...anyway. Cya. |
| miss-blackhair 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseoh my goodness, that excellent. brilliant. my heart is totally melting! its awesome. you're a great writer! =) |
| Adoniel 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abusewow...this is absolutely amazing. This is one of the most beautiful retellings of any story that I have ever read before. It was a great idea to portray everything from the angel's point of view. I admire you talent. ^-^ |
| ellabella 2005-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was... amazing. i can't find the words i want to describe it. you did really good on this story. wow that was so good. i can't get over it. at first i thought the glowing meant that she was destined to be something greater. but it only meant her death. how sad. i really like the red rose part. i would've said a white rose for innocence but i think a red rose is better because it indicates a strength and passion for life. where i live there are no homeless people. it's amazing but when i visit the city i see them everywhere. i live in the country, in a really small town of only a few thousand and we don't have a homeless person. we have people being abused which is just as bad if not the same thing. i like to think (or maybe forget the reality of life) that everywhere else is the same as where i am. if a woman is hit in the street by a man then someone would step in. but sadly that is not the case in other places. i think it's just the small town vibe or something. but then again i've seen a man hit his wife outside a public bar in my home town and no one pulled him up on it. it was such a disgracful display of humanity. i hated it so much. i was so disgusted with myself and everyone around me for not stepping in. anywho, i better go and check out this "The Blue Guitar" ellabella |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is very compelling and inspiring. Everything comes together perfectly, and I like how I could see things clearly from the angel's perspective - it would have been easier to take on the perspective of the child, but what you did shows artistic maturity. Awesome! -- J.max |