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| Pheobe Meryll 2005-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseI like this, but I think it was too short to call it a short story. Perhaps a sketch. Very good word choice, except maybe not "fakely"...that's not a word is it? anyway good job again on the emotional aspect. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abusewow, this is powerful for a short piece. i could feel its meaning inside of me. EB |
| Bernita Bean 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Absolutely beautiful. |