 pleasecometrue 2005-07-30 . chapter 1Reading this reminds me of how tired and frustrated I am too. I really like the structure of this poem and the fact that it doesn't really have a set one. You could take it any where, very erratic and almost random, but each sentence is very well thought out. I like the little rant at the end too. The fact that you used no punctuation in it just further pushes the point across that you are tired and fed up. Great write, I'm impressed ;) |