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Reviews For: Guiding you to Tomorrow

Josephine Fereshetian
2005-07-29
ch 1,
Um...this story line is over used a lot. But I am curious to see how you will make it different then all those others. It was a good beginning, short but good. I think anything longer would have overdone it. Good job and I hope you keep going!
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