this was sweet, but not my favorite. you may wanna caps the "I" in "i know you won't stay". please dont get me wrong, it isnt my favorite by no fault of your writing. just because this isnt my thing i guess

~Mack

Thanks for your review. :) It really brightened my day.

I loved this piece, especially the "eyes full of tears, fringed with star-dust". That was the prettiest line. You really have talent.

Cheers!

Well-written haiku... very sad.

wow, this was a interesting haiku, i loved it.

I love the imagery in this poem; dreamy moonlight, stars wink, sand-filled footprints... very well writen.

I love the dusty detail like "star-dust" and "sand-filled"

Aww, very beautiful. Great job X

Excellent! What a lovely read that was.

oh, very pretty. great work, keep it up!

-Taryn

(please review back)

wow... very sad, very moving, beautifully written... love d descriptions... putting it on my favs list fo sure... keep up d great work... and if ur ever bored, i'd love reviews from u on sum of my stuf...

Wow. Very good. :) I like it. :)

~Struggling-soul

"Pin point stars" - It reminds me of constellations.Wonderful.