Reviews for Moonlight Haiku - FictionPress.com

Clodhopper 2005-08-23 ch 1,	this was sweet, but not my favorite. you may wanna caps the "I" in "i know you won't stay". please dont get me wrong, it isnt my favorite by no fault of your writing. just because this isnt my thing i guess ~Mack
kaleidoscopes 2005-08-10 ch 1,	Thanks for your review. :) It really brightened my day. I loved this piece, especially the "eyes full of tears, fringed with star-dust". That was the prettiest line. You really have talent. Cheers!
Quelleruth 2005-08-02 ch 1,	Well-written haiku... very sad.
Infection 2005-07-31 ch 1,	wow, this was a interesting haiku, i loved it.
Ellin Louise 2005-07-31 ch 1,	I love the imagery in this poem; dreamy moonlight, stars wink, sand-filled footprints... very well writen.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-30 ch 1,	I love the dusty detail like "star-dust" and "sand-filled"
Jessicka-scab 2005-07-30 ch 1,	Aww, very beautiful. Great job X
Ygg 2005-07-30 ch 1,	Excellent! What a lovely read that was.
Kaitlyn J. Richards 2005-07-29 ch 1,	oh, very pretty. great work, keep it up! -Taryn (please review back)
aries-diva-JC 2005-07-29 ch 1,	wow... very sad, very moving, beautifully written... love d descriptions... putting it on my favs list fo sure... keep up d great work... and if ur ever bored, i'd love reviews from u on sum of my stuf...
demon in disguise 2005-07-29 ch 1,	Wow. Very good. :) I like it. :) ~Struggling-soul
Autumn-Flowers 2005-07-29 ch 1,	"Pin point stars" - It reminds me of constellations.Wonderful.