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| Ramenluver 2007-07-05 ch 1,   | Wonderful use of wording. It was quite chilling. But I do agree with the other reviewer about the title. It was a little bland. |
| yael-heiman 2005-11-20 ch 1, | Oh my gosh, this took me a couple minutes to figure out, but now I get it. This is really good. Only I'm not crazy about the title, although I can see why you chose it. Maybe you should use the term "emerald eyes" in the piece at some point, to make it more fitting. Good job. |