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| deartokyo 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abusesweet jeeze. That has to be one of the best short stories I've ever read. It's definately going on my favorite list. Have you ever considered getting it published? |
| marie ryan 2008-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHorrible ending. I was just getting into the story and there is no ending? |
| Ashley Warmington 2007-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is amazing, you should continue. |
| KylerM 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, everything about this story is beautiful. You can so deeply understand the pain inflicted by emotions and lost loves. I can't imagine having love stripped from my memory, I can think of few things worse. Your use of it in this story is very appropriate and good. I suppose this story was supposed to be longer, because the plot line of the assistant never comes to a conclusion, but maybe that is the point: that this hell, this horrible situation, will never come to an end, as the war between heaven and hell can never come to an end. I like the story-telling, I like the word choice, and I have very few complaints. Thank you for submitting KylerM |
| Pose For Me 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAnother bloody good story. I'll admit I have never seen a hell like this in my mind, but I haven't really thought of hell entirely, except for the river that is the boundary. A bit odd, but that's as far as my imagination will let it go. Your description is breath taking. I could feel myself there, as if on the scene of the writing. The way you go into background detail without having a flashback is remarkable. I envy that talent. You're a bloody great writer. Truly. I envy you without a doubt. Regina O.B. |
| BlueDragonGirl1 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! You have a really, really big imagination and the words you used to describe everything was pheonomonal! |