The best story ever! I loved these characters, and your writing!

Wow. That was wonderful. Amazing. Brilliant. I don't know how many stories I have reviewed of yours but I like this one A LOT. But, of course, I have a soft spot for the firsts. :)

I love this story, but maybe you could slow the plot down a little?? It seems like it's going crazy fast, but I'll keep reading.

I really love this story so far and I just found it today and I can't stop reading it. This is definitely a story I find myself reading more than once.. I hope you keep this story on here so I can read it again..

This is a brilliant story! I am so glad I came across it.
I really like it, Dani and Bryan really are impressive characters, and the plot-line is surprisingly convincing.
Great job!
-AG :)

AW, That was so cute! Loved it!

wow, im really in a reading mood today =]
this story is great too =D
i think you should do a sequel, if the ideas are still swimming around there somewhere =] and i think that it'd be a great idea to do it from Bryan's point of view too.
this story made me almost cry and laugh aloud.
well done
=]

AWESOME!

I saw this on someone's Favorites list, and I'm glad I checked it out. Dani and Bryan were wonderfully written characters, and I'm glad it ended on a happy note.

I hope you decide to write that sequel someday!

*yawn* ahh! i read that all in one sitting. ^_^ so cute!





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and coke is most definetly better than pepsi =]

hey! :) i read your story in two sittings--i had to break off in the middle because it was getting way late. anyways, i LOVED it. the romance was v. cute, and i loved how in the end, they worked it out but it didnt have a cheesy solution, either. keep writing! -shawna jennifer

AH! I'm crazy in love with ur story! I love it, love it, love it! The ending is priceless. It got me all giddy like real published romance novels. I'm off to read the sequel now!

One word describes your story...CUTE!

I would love to see a sequel! Yay for finishing a cute story!

I loved the story. Don't write a sequel its so much better to just leave it.

L