Reviews for Becoming Nardaria's Queen

Reviews For: Becoming Nardaria's Queen

smiley 2006-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI absolutely LOVE it! I agree with your reviewers when they say that this is really good.. and I LOVE your characterization of the king... it's quite original. I only wish you'd continue it, so we could see what other 'troubles' Vanora gets into ;)
lilylupin7 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseI have to agree with your other reviewers. This is a wonderful story and I wish yo'd continue it.
Pose For Me 2005-08-24 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved the story. Vanora is my idol. Okay, not really, but I adore her character. She didn't act before she thought of things, nor did she keep her mouth shut and be the dummy that sat next to the king. Speaking of, Antavas has to be one of the best written kings I have ever read about. Sure, the story was more for Vanora, but I don't know how this came to be, but I like Antavas. Most kings would kill their wives for speaking against them, but he didn't. Kudos for him. It's a pity you don't plan to add on new chapters or finish it. My vote would be to continue writing, even if you didn't post it on FP and get it published. I truly think it's that good. No, it's not good; it's a bloody good read. Regina O.B.
Ballerina with a Gun 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseWow. Seriously, that was really good. It's such a pity you won't be updating it - this is very good. Vanora is extremely likeable, as well as strong and resourceful and compassionate. It was written very well, with beautiful words and a good, interesting plot. In fact, the only problem with your story was a problem with spelling and grammar errors. I loved the ending; thought it was very well done. Kudos.

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