O love interest... neyways the details are awesome and vivid... keep writing

Ok, just to clarify a few things about the reviews once more, since I just got a long one from a tv boyfriend stealer...i mean...anne.

Ok, you were pretty much right for the characters.However, I blended people to get the characters. You were right, Kass = me and Cody = Joe but both of them also have characteristics of other people i know, however, mostly based on us.

Lara is a combination of Bri and Ciara. Come to think of it, they're not that different. But the bossiness is from ciara (dont kill me) and the "lets go fight" attitude is from bri. The looks for Lara are also more based on Bri.

I'm sorry, but Todd is not based on Greg Sanders, though you can imagine him as Greg instead of Donald, who he is truely based on. It'll be explained later.

Later: Now Casey is actually based on you for looks and Lindsey for personality and height, hence the Casey - Todd/Donald relationship. I haven't decided yet whether Casey will die, but I wouldn't count on it.I have to choose between two characters to die but you will never know who! muah hahaha!

And since I highly doubt that Casey will get to stab Nate, how bout I just make it so your character hurts him in some evil way? And when you dedicate me, can you say Riley's mine?! jkjk.

And the romance isnt obvious! Just like I'm not a spaz! Which as we all know I'm not...sometimes...

By the way Anne, we NEED to do something crazy for the first day of school...I just streaked my hair red (same color as last time) but its almost gone cause of swimming and such. So wanna try that again except not by ciara? lol. (dont kill me ciara!) I think we should.

Rhia

i think Casey is based on me. Who else has brown hair and blue eyes? DUH!

I AM NOT SHORT! I RESENT THIS! will I survive? pwese?

and double number thingies are deleted, so you will never get "Skeleton five-hundred", it'll always turn out to be "Skeleton fifty" in the review. And it does sound like a metal band.

I ALSO HINT THE OBVIOUS ROMANCE! and i'm dead positive that the characters are based on people. Look: Casey=me, Kass=you, Cody=Joe, Todd=Greg Sanders (who else would I be dating?) and Larissa=Ciara (rude hand gesture in chapter 1 gives it away)

mmk, ciao chica and DON'T KILL CASEY BECAUSE I THINK SHE'S MY ALTER-EGO NOW! can i stab Nate? PWEASE? i'll dedicate a chapter of Bargaining Chip to you if you let me XD

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I HINT TEH OBVIOUS ROMANCE. I'M TOO LAZY TO CORRECT TEH. BLAH.

Hey. I', just gonna respond to my reviews cause nothing else is happening and i'm bored as hell.

Ciara: Yes the characters are based on real people, some of them a combination of two people. I didn't think of Ren when I made Nate, but now that you say that, sure. He has Ren's water polo ability, but his looks and personality are based on two people that I know. And last but not least, Casey was a secondary character. The three main (hero's as they call them)characters are Kass, Lara, and Cody. Todd and Casey are secondary characters. Nate and the Leader of the Skeletons are technically the "Villains" so yeah, of course I know what I'm doing! Duh! I'll try to use some more visual references.

LH: I guess the name does sound kinda like a metal band, except its "Skeleton 50" not "Skeleton 50" nice typo there. I did write more. Go me. I'll try to update soon. So far I'm doing a chapter a day or so. So go me. I love you too.

Now I just need other people besides my friends and boyfriend to review for me. Hehe...no. Oh well.

Rhia

Main Characters are not supposed to get caught in the 3rd chapter!j/k ... oh well i suoppose u know what ur doing... the writing is good but a little more visual references por favor..

MORE AWESOMENEMNITY. Er. It ruled. Again. I love you. Seriously.

okay time to play who are they! j/k is Nate v. vaguely ren? i am there... no you didnt mention a gorgeous personage... hehe your writing is really good and the plot line is quickly becoming entangled...

A beautifully written chapter. I'm in love with the story. Write more now. Please. Do it for me.

this is such a spooky beginning... r they based on real people... not u of course cuz ur short but who else? j/k

The name of the story sounds like a metal band. "AND NOW, SKELETON 50!" But it doesn't stop it from being awesome. I KNOW THINGS.