this

poem

makes me

want

to

slit my wrists

you suck. go die.

I wasnt liking this poem too much until the end. The end makes the constant repetition of "red red blood" necesary. the "then black" shocks slightly and turns this into something more profound. I really like it!

i like the ending. very morbid poem, but the format is just mesmorising.

Kinda morbid, but it kept me interested. Good job.

i like this; short and simple...how many countless people can relate? too many. well done.

-K

this is scary but really raw. and raw emotion is what we really want. very serious and dark, depends on your mood. like me i'm feeling kind of out of place because i just ate chocolate and am currently getting high...

Nice one.

Inspired by anything in particular, or does it come out of thin air?

A common topic, yet you make it an interesting read. Nice and vivid. TheCryingGame

Woe! *Shrieks in happiness* Yay, I love it! Your poems rock! Can't wait for more!

beautiful poem. it's so dark, but I find beauty mostly in the darkest of the world. self harm is really a problem in this world! It sucks that people go through it because their so called 'friends' don't understand, and then they're not there for you (or anyone.. just saying). anyway, it's too early for me to review properly, but i enjoyed this poem a lot!Good job.

Nousha*

Ouch, the format proves to be fairly effective. -Arcane Devices (a.k.a. ADD)

Painful death