Great imagery here! I really like it. Btw, I sent that link to "Get Up" to my friend and she really liked it. Thanks for the review you left me as well! *hugs*

As deep as the ocean itself, good one Writerforever.

*Pega-Gryph.

Simply written and clearly phrased. Very nice. I can relate...I think most of us can! :}

Awesome poem. I like the beginning but the ends ok too. keep postin!

amber

Wow, for just writting it tonight it sounds awsome. It has a nice balanced feel to it. I really liked the ending, nice work :)