Exactly the imaginative imagery that leaves endless possibilities and the impression of magic.

I really like 'Blank Thoughts.' It's got great visual imagery, and the persona's voice is really quite engaging. A great effort!

Hey! I really liked these poems, but I especially liked "Mermaids Singing"..I tried to review, but it didn't let me, it said I already reviewed that chapter (even though I didn't) I hope it's ok, but I used Mermaids Singing for a poetry analysis...I said it was by you though! If you have a problem with this, just review and I'll not use it...But I liked it so much.. :D And I gave all the credit to you...SO good job on writing these :D Keep up the GREAT work!-The Masked Marauder

Hey, i love your the way you write this poem. It's oh so owesome! My favorite line was "I could write about the ocean blueAnd mermaids singing in a great lagoon"(:

OI! This is AWESOME! I read all three of these poems, and they're all amazing. You should consider sending them into a contest or some sort of, maybe, if you write enough of them, a publisher as an anthology. Just an idea, because you're actually a really great poet. Keep up the AMAZING work :D

Oh *is breathless* so beautiful. I love mermaids, I love them, I love them. I have just begun a story about them that I might post sometime on fcpress and this is very much how I invision them. the childish innocence and supple beauty is so lovely isn't it? beautiful poem. I can tell you really like the subject you're writing on.

This one was a little weak. I dont' know what you mean by "the gaze out through" and "secrets to peep" sounded strange.

very pretty. I specially liked the last stanza. "A baby bird on it’s first flight" should be "ITS first flight" though.

I really liked these ones, I hope you will finish writing out that flowed of my tounge well because you rhymed with out making it chidish..ex. The cat had a hat and a batthat's that

lol, I think you should finish these there great and fun to read.

I loved this one. I enjoyed the imagination and the randomization of imagery in this. I like those kind of poems, that makes your thoughts go wild!)

Short and nice. Love the "Mermaids Singing." I plan on looking at the rest of your stuff; the stories look interesting. Are you Jewish? Or do you find WWII an interesting topic? Anyways, that's enough questions. Please take a look at my stuff, which is only two things... ,Sam

Even though this is only the second thing I've read by you...I must say, you are a very accomplished author! This is AWESOME! yay! *claps* keep it up :D

This one's pretty. What can one write on blank paper? Where do the possibilities end? Loved it.

thoughtless-Blazer

P.S. Thanks for ALL the reviews, I will continue the story.. when I find my notebook to type it up agian. Heh.

Very nice, cute in a way. So true too.

I wish I had found this poem months ago... it's the kind of thing that I would be able to put into a scrapbook I was making for school (provided you let me use it ;)) but I really like it. You seem to be a driven author.