Reviews for The Seal of Prayers

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For What Its Worth 2006-04-02 ch 14,	abusethis i sa really good story, but, while they are not as frequent as in TWD, i really must call you on the exclamation marks.
Tides of war 2006-03-22 ch 14, anon.	abuseGood story, but I find your use of exclamation marks to be a bit much. It gives a nice punch though. that was the only thing I could really find out of place. Hope this helps in any way possible.
Lynnryo 2006-03-22 ch 14,	abuseIt cut off one of my reveiws ;.; Oh well.. It was supposed to have read 'Marcus is a man after my own heart. Haha. A bit of a bad pun on my boyfriends account.' I really like this story too
Lynnryo 2006-03-22 ch 12,	abuseI like the name Torren, it really does suit him. I love they way you have with getting names right for your characters. sigh If only I had that power...
Lynnryo 2006-03-22 ch 6,	abuseMarcus is a man after my own heart
Lynnryo 2006-03-22 ch 3,	abuseHeh. I had nothing better to do, so I searched through some other stories. I started reading this one and just now I realized who the author was =p. I love this story just as much as your other one. Good job, keep up the work! =3
shane 2005-10-19 ch 14, anon.	abuseomg...i love it! i couldn't stop reading...I love Maleran she is awesome and marcus seems like a player...great job!!
temblance 2005-10-08 ch 7,	abuseHey..I'm back again, after a long absence (sorry about that). anyway, it seems like every new character that you introduce is multi-dimensional and real sounding. Brian is very entertaining...I liked reading about him this chapter. The story is coming along nicely.
temblance 2005-09-14 ch 6,	abuseI hope that Reisshen isn't out of the plot for good- I really liked her. It is interesting how you characterize Marcus, falling for two girls in a short space of time. I wonder which one he will actually choose. The chapter was good grammar-wise, and I love your dialogue. It's so expressive. Although something feels like it is not right- like you are withholding information or something, and something bad might happen. This chapter made me suspicious. Well, good job
temblance 2005-09-09 ch 5,	abusenice chapter. My only cc's: I would have liked to hear more detail about the plant spirit, but since that's only a minor thing in the plot, it's okay. "She was somewhat shorter than most women as well, but very beautifully built for one of her size. She wore rather plain hunting clothes, and a beautifully made but well used cloak of an odd color that blended in with the foliage."--you used beautifully twice here, and it stood out as being repetitive. Otherwise, good job!
bushido-judoka 2005-09-06 ch 5,	abusehiho, I really like this story, also I really wonder where the main romance is gonna start (I'm only at chapter 5... rofl) well I'll review later again
Esquirella 2005-09-01 ch 14,	abuseNO! I liked Marcus with Maleran! pout But I like Reisshen, too, so I guess it's not a bad plot twist. LOL! You do like to keep us guessing though, don't you?
temblance 2005-08-29 ch 4,	abuseI found one missing comma error: "“I’m Caitlin. Maleran is it? That’s an… unusual name"--should be a comma after Maleran. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story, and hearing about Maleran's half-human background. I love to see the progression of Caitlin as a character too...it is realistic and very well written. I really don't have any other cc's, and well, I don't really put many stories on my favorites list, but I really think this might become one quite soon. SOrry I haven't caught up to the latest chapter yet, but I've been really busy with school. ANyway, great job.
Lulai 2005-08-17 ch 13,	abuseWow. That was a feirce. And you left it at such a cliff hanger! Caitlin's really starting to grow into herself, with the help of Torren. It's really nice to see. And, although you had a bit of plot going, now there is a concrete problem/adventure! Yay! Keep up the good work.
temblance 2005-08-13 ch 3,	abuseI loved how the retainer showed more emotion in the chapter The retainer said, “Very well. I will accompany you, though… I may become a touch… maudlin. The singing always gets to me" But anyway, the maid lady was so eerie. You did an awesome job on her. At the beginning you almost think she's nice, but then you sense that something is wrong, and she attacks! Once again, I really enjoy reading this. Your characters are wonderfully illustrated.

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