sad and chilling. "Know that I love you/ if i could i would change"

I love this. I don't know why though. But it's probably one of my favourite poems of yours. I really, really like this!!

Love u,Tona

I have a friend who said similar things...but she made a promise this time..GR8 poem it really shows the emotion and the un-worthy self doubt of those under the knife~TRW

very nice, love the last line. keep up the great work! ^_^--kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

Well besides the capitolization and puncituation it's a really good poem. The words are really deep and straight to the point. I like it. I know how it is to feel like this. I've felt EXACTLY the same way before. This poem really stuck with me. I like it!

Yes i really like your style. The short lines give more impact.

~tickles!~

That's got to hurt them. But that was well written. Short lines do actually give stronger impact... I've not noticed that before. Good job.