simply awesome writing.
speechless.

yea i would have to say this one is really good too. I love your style of writing.. its so different, but amazing. i just can't explain

"and suddenly

i'm embaressed

i've just said "yes"

before you even asked." ..LOL

I like how it started off telling a story but then ended in abstact-er sentences after the person gets embaressed..~TRW

wow, very nice. awesome descriptions. keep it up! love these lines:"oblivion of abstract

pulls me under.

and my eyes clash with the silk.

a milky pearly grey,

the water reflects the sunshine

as i have to witness day."

--kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

This was really good.

~tickles!`

Really abstract, but I like it. Too many fave lines to pick one. Nice work!

That's wonderful...