Wow, I loved this! My favourite lines were 'Chaos ravaged' and 'The vengeful void'. Very cool. Depressing, but cool.

wow...all this within u?i love it...-gone-

really great i feel the same as that a lot of the for the review-zak

brilliant poem, strong emotions conveyed in it, a truely great piece of work, well done!

Is this what you're going through? Poor you, I feel for you. I hope that things improve. Good poem you have there.

i don't know how many times i've thought that. good job and keep