this piece has just has a very very good rhythm going with it...and the line "leaving me here in my winter" just touches something in me...good job...although i would like it better if the poem is on a formal format without the hyphens and stuff...

truly yours...

Very nice work. Perhaps you should considered adding some more versus and developing the story a little more. Really well written piece here.

Nice, quite different. The flow really fits greensleeves. This is really beautiful. QueenVixta

Hmm..I love the line 'leaving me in my winter' It really spoke to me for some reason..and the rest of the poem is just beautiful! What more can I say?

Much love, Rosanna.

I've played Greensleeves manytimes on my violin...it is one of my favorite songs to play and this poem goes really good with it. I love the first two lines especially. Beautiful. I thought this was very clever! Keep writting more like this!

Really beautiful, very deep and I really like it. QueenVixta