|Reviews for Black Tears|
| laughter at the funeral 9/10/05 . chapter 1
this piece has just has a very very good rhythm going with it...and the line "leaving me here in my winter" just touches something in me...good job...although i would like it better if the poem is on a formal format without the hyphens and stuff...
| Matthew James Current 9/7/05 . chapter 1
Very nice work. Perhaps you should considered adding some more versus and developing the story a little more. Really well written piece here.
| QueenVixta 9/4/05 . chapter 1
Nice, quite different. The flow really fits greensleeves. This is really beautiful. QueenVixta
| Rosanna28 8/12/05 . chapter 1
Hmm..I love the line 'leaving me in my winter' It really spoke to me for some reason..and the rest of the poem is just beautiful! What more can I say?
Much love, Rosanna.
| LOSTxINSIDExMYxDREAMS 8/4/05 . chapter 1
I've played Greensleeves manytimes on my violin...it is one of my favorite songs to play and this poem goes really good with it. I love the first two lines especially. Beautiful. I thought this was very clever! Keep writting more like this!
| SayIt'sWrong 7/31/05 . chapter 1
Really beautiful, very deep and I really like it. QueenVixta