Powerful start, going into humour and serious thoughts at the same time. A good combination. I love it and the way it can relate to many people.

Keep it up.

wow...so sad and painful...dark words. the beginning was well put for selfesteem...once again, splendid work!

~Sorrow~

the summary caught my attention. i'm sure it would anyone.

very powerful piece you have here, deeply expressed in amazing words.

Wow, really good. I like it. I love the emotions in this.

awesome.the summary definatly caught my attention, i had to see what it was.

this reminds me of when i pass older guys i dont know.or something like that, maybe the one i stalk.such beautiful people.oh beautiful stranger, do you know why i love you.

self-esteem issues for me.and perfect flaws for them.

Great transition of emotion and opening.

powerful and deeply affecting piece, the writing is just amazing and sets an almost humurous look to it toward the begining but crashes down toward the end. a lovely poem that tugs at the heart, a wonderful read.

~* noelle

Wow, this is a powerful poem, and effective because of that, but also because of the delicate expressions of love that pervades it. The only thing I didn't like was the formatting. A beautiful poem; well done.