It's really good to see some new pieces from you! I love this one, the title is really prety and the whole poem is very deep and in a way I can relate. QueenVixta

This is lovely, and sweetly expressed (even in its angst). A nice way with words you have.

beautiful choice of words.

I liked the first two verses the most, though I think it's the second two where the meaning comes across more clearly.