Wo, i'm really feelin the love here. the discription took me away. i didn't know acouple of words so i googled it but oh well. your style here is great- like a dazed drunk puking words out. love it

btw, thx alot for the review, u and me are a lot alike. wait, r u a girl or a guy? u said u have high standards for girls, but I don't know if ur a girl urself O.otoodles~

That last line creeped me out, which is good.

Now, this probably won't mean much to you, considering that your impression of me=bad author, but I thoroughly enjoy just about all your poems. I can almost hear the words in this poem as lyrics in a rock song.

impressive.the first and third stanzas are really good. overall this would make an awesome story.