i love how it goes from positive to negative.. i never would have thought it would turn out that way. great job!

Opposites really attract in this poem...lol...sorry, lame joke. Anyway, brilliant contrast in the two paragraphs. Shows you the up and the down. Which is good, because love and hate are always deluding each other. We have to find the line between.

ANNA

oh god chilling...really wicked idea. i like the contrast between descripions, and the detachedy with it being "someone" instead of a persific person. great poem.