it's a good story but the capitalisation of certain words is getting annoying

:) i hope you get a new chapter of this up soon. i had to reread the whole thing. i'm also excited to read your new version of haven. so PWEASE put it up soon! hehe, i

hey Keep up the good work oaky. can't wait for the next chapter

wow your story is very intresting so i hope you start you story again when you want to just email me when you do because i like you story alot

P.S. this is the first story i ever read like this

sounds pretty interesting so far, id like to read more soon!i think that it would have been better if you wrote everything in past tense, i understand that these are flashbacks but a story sounds much better when its written in past tenseUPDATE SOON!

you suck...just kidding...^^ go eliza! haha, yeah...boreddeded...

~*MoNgOoSe*~

heyy! awesome! a little short, and not much happened, but good none the less! i can't wait until you come out with more! sorry it took a bit for me to read it. i love your chapter names...they're really good. lylas!~MoNgOoSe~

YAY! New Chapter...I hope you work on the next chapter soon too. I love this story. Lack of motivation sucks. *tear* I'll check out the new story now. hehe byez ^_^

please update soon.

hey...dude! i loved your story, i hope you know who this is...you have spanish with me, fourth block. haha. yeah i just felt like being nice and reviewing!! i'm glad you didn't do what you did with haven on this one. where you had to have 5 people review before you put up the next chapter! that ** me off! lol, well i'm glad you got started on the next one! i'm sure it'll be awesome as well!! you rock my socks...which are... black...~MonGooSe~

Wow i've really been slacking... *floods* I suck...*sniffles as tears stop* i'm so ashamed of myself...*lowers head in shame* I'll be on ball next chapter!! *waits for chapter 7 to arrive*

Whoot, i like that chapter. You introduced new characters, and a new conflict. Score! I really like this story. And don't worry those parts aren't that bad, i've read worse...much worse...Anywho...next chapter will be out when? ^_^

very good, so sad though, it makes me so angry, i have had a similar experience i can never understand why people do that.

wow the poor girl! how awful! i can totslly relate to how she feels cuz i have a frend ale that went thru this for a couple of months. wut did she mean wen she sed her parents never asked where she was? that they never reported her missing to the police or never talked to her about wut happened? wel great story! mad love!

I never reviewed this chapter. Which makes me kinda sad. I'm slacking *floods* Anyway I like this story, then again i like all of your stories, well the ones i've read so far. Hey look *points* its LEXI! whoot whoot. Well waiting on the next chapter...*taps foot impatiently* Tanoshimu (i got a new Japanese Dictonary, so i'm going nuts w/ it. I love it. WHOOT)