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| Dirty Secret 2005-12-09 ch 9,   | Aw. This is so adorable! And I absolutely love it. UPDATE SOON! |
| Indigo 2005-11-24 ch 8, | This is such a cute story! I really like the way that the characters interact and how Melanie wasn't out scheming to break Noah and Josie up even though Josie wasn't right for him. I also really appreciate that you don't really use curse words and that Melanie has a sweet character; can I assume that she's a Christian? That'd be so awesome; it's hard to fin good stories with good characters like that. Keep up the good work! |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 8, | Oh my God! Noah knows that Melanie likes him...and I think that he secretly likes her back because of the last sentence that ended his part in this chapter. The prom that night is going to be interesting, so hurry up and update! ~~Trinity p.s. Very good and informative chap. :) |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 7, | Oh my God. She left her notebook in Noah's car and that means that if Noah reads it, he'll find out everything about Melanie. This is so interesting, I can't wait to read what happens next. Let's just hope that he didn't take any notice or respects Melanie's privacy, but I doubt that since he must be curious to what Melanie's hiding. Very good chapter. Way to build up the suspense! ~~Trinity |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 6, | I am so excited for Melanie, she finally has a chance for Noah to like her and not be held up by anyone including Josie. It's good that finally, Noah gets to enjoy his life instead of rushing around doing errands for Josie. The intensity really heats up between the two of them, so I can't wait to see what's going to happen! ~~Trinity |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 3, | Wow...very good chapter, you have here. I think that maybe Josie was a bit overprotecting, but, of course, Noah could fall for Melanie if they keep getting closer. I think I feel sorry for Josie with the whole abrupt break up thing, because she seems to be working so hard and now, she has an idea that everything's gonna fall apart. I really think that Noah still has feelings for Josie, except that maybe he was overreacting then. No matter, very good chapter and I LOVE this story. :) ~~Trinity |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 1, | I really think that Melanie should tell Noah that she likes her, I mean, who knows? Maybe Noah is hiding his feelings for her too, and for a cover, Josie's always there! Very promising story. ~~Trinity |
| happilynuts 2005-10-22 ch 6, | miaowz! melanie's so cute!luvDee |
| happilynuts 2005-10-22 ch 5, | lolz, so engrossed in your story i forgot 2 review! more action! lol! humph...wanna read more...luvDee |
| happilynuts 2005-10-22 ch 1, | hey, this sounds really good! lolz, im off to read more!luvDee |
| Juniper Nights 2005-10-17 ch 6, | Good job on the story. Keep it comming |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-05 ch 5, | This chapter feels a little under-developed. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-05 ch 3, | Yes! NOah has acted, the sun my shine again! |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-05 ch 2, | A great start. Not overdone to the point of utter cliche. |
| Kim-the-owlthinggy 2005-08-10 ch 4, | hey this is good... can't wait for the next chapter... lol! |