Amazing, memorable descriptions (as is the case with the rest of your work.) Excellent.

yes yes and more yes.

The raw emotion is real. Very nice and angsty. The format was new to me. Good job on that. But it feel clichet for some reason. I don't know, its just a very attractive poem. Nice!=)

I like the format of this poem.Very original.

i relate to the emotions-- i am not a cutter, but this isn't actually about cutting, is it? because it doesn't feel that way.

Beautiful. My favourite part was the first line. "A screwed up paper angel" - it sort of sounds like crumpled elegance (I really can't find another way to describe it, it makes sense in my head...) and I caught a bit of dark humour in it.

Nicely written, typographically as well.

~ Jen

Perfect ending, the format and the way it just dropped off... like blood.

i loved this poem, too. i loved how you used a paper angel as a comparison. very nice...well, KW!~davida

so vivid,great imagery.beautiful.

E~Ebony.

Beautiful. I had a much different experience with it. I view (ed) cutting as something caused by things, thoughts, feelings, extc that were so ugly and disgusting that you had to get it out. Bleed it out. Something like that. It's a ** to stop though. It's an addiction like any other.

Anyways. Vivid imagery in this, even if, as explained above, I don't relate much.

beautiful, painful vivid imagery. taut and disturbing, yet somehow graceful. really wonderfully written. like the ending- it sort of spirals off.

i don't really like cutting poems (or cutting, for that matter) so i shan't comment on the content of this piece. I really liked how you laid this pie out..particularly the interesting bracketing in "burn up this in(toxic)ating plastic life"..do keep writing !=D

Glorify in the individual perhaps as well as inhale the appreciation of life in its entirety.

I really like this! Much applause!

good job. you're talking to a semi-cutter. i only did it once, but almost have again. but it's been almost two months since the last time. k/w~shadowofyou~