Aww wow i think this is great. I love the technique you used...and most importantly you're a born again christian! wo!! so am I!! I will see u in the kingdom LOL :D Thank u for emailing me, it is an encouragment to know that I'm not the only believer on this site.

May God Bless you abundantly xRachx

That's really good..

Wow - this is so sweet and romantic! I love how you changed the point of view in the middle - very effective. ::sigh:: I love reading the poetry you have up here. It's amazing! Keep up the awesome work:-D -- J.max (And thank you for the kind reviews:-D It's always encouraging to know that people are cheering you on from the sideline! :-D Especially when those people are fellow Christians. God bless!)

wow i like it! keep it up ;)