Reviews for Heartless, Homeless

vballgurl154 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseI really, really like it. I like how you put two words on the last line so if you read it there's a space inbetween the last two lines (if you even meant to do it like that) great job!~kem~
Allie 2005-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseI have internet! woots and does a happy dance Well, anyways this was definitely awesome, lol, don't say I don't like your work cuz this was great. It wasn't all generic and everything didn't have to rhyme, but it flowed too. So...um...if that made ANY sense at all...lol, I'm in Detroit, it's messing with my head ;). You know, all those anti Av people. Well, toodles Luvheart!
HauntedMisery 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good, great work!
Cloud Burst 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abusevery powerful and moving. great work!
darkpaladin13 2005-07-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou've no idea how relatable this is to me. I think the song goes together . . .kinda ballady but then it's kinda not. Really unique style in my head . . . anyways, I thought you did a good job and I kinda get the meaning, good work.
Nimnengil Parmanole 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseexcelently done! this is really good. as for meaning, i have ideas, but i wouldn't trust them. they're probably wrong. but it's a very good song!