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Reviews For: The broken one

Tenou Amaya and Sanada Sayu...
2005-09-27
ch 1,
Good work! I can definitly relate.
Indigo-Andie
2005-07-30
ch 1,
i love it, its beautiful and reminds me of a person i know and a pome i wrote- the rhyming is good, its not the first thing you notice and not strained or tried sounding- i love it!
Evaa Moffat
2005-07-30
ch 1,
beautiful. so true! keep writing. i love the line about facade of open seams...~evaa
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