love the bitterness dripping from the world

I love it. It's so true. I love the message, and you showed the point well. Great job!

I think it's awesome (just like all your poems). It's very true. :) But then...I'm kinda like you. I hate half the poems I write, while everyone tells me they're nice. :)

I liked it. I don't know why you don't. I thought it was really good. I really liked the first line... And yes it was a cynical poem, but hey- that's how the world is. Loved it. Keep writing. I'm putting this on my favourites.