Ahh Russian Roulette is a sweet game. The way them Russians play it of course. And my feet really are numb. Good poem. Return the favor? :)

More lovely rhyming.

Hm. I enjoyed the wording of the poem but the story behind it wasn't quite conveyed, to me anyways. I think it could actually be made a bit longer, but that's just me. All the lines flowed nicely and everything fit with each other. I would of enjoyed it a bit more if I would of known a bit more of the plot behind it but that's okay. Anyways, good poem! I really enjoyed it.

It flows nicely, and it seems like there's a story behind it. Very powerful. Great job. :D

~Struggling-soul

Nice flow. I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds pretty. ^.^;