Loved the story. Stark reality, a very pragmatic, down to earth way of describing eagerness and the sad results it might bring.
I love authors that aren't afraid of a true story, without all the dairytale-like romantic wishful thinking.
Very well done, a pleasure reading it.

Best regards,
Kira

Well, umm... that was... er... interesting... I guess...

that horrible bastard. She was too trusting...makes you wonder what other girls have had that happen to them...

Horrid men like him should go to hell. However, Sophie's lack of caution played a part as well. Poor dear.

What an evil bastard. Good job writing this, even though its really sad.

I always hear about these things and it's awful. I don't think my mind took that vivid description very well. I cringed. Sad, but good job. Men like that should go to hell!

You're a caution, aren't you?