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Moonjava
2005-08-21
ch 1,
Oh, wow. This is written so well. Very nice.
lime215
2005-08-20
ch 1,
that was impressive have u ever thought abut telling ur mum? how u feel and how ur not ur sis? just a thought but it was a sick poem on feeling! keep it up! :)
Lemaly Orangeflower
2005-07-31
ch 1,
Very well written. Many of these thoughts have flowed through my mind as well. Sometimes, I just want people to take time and see me for me, instead of treating me so badly.

Beautifully written. I like it a lot. The use of capitalised letters really enunciated the points that seemed to matter the most to you. I really enjoyed this. Good work!
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