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| Moonjava 2005-08-21 ch 1, | Oh, wow. This is written so well. Very nice. |
| lime215 2005-08-20 ch 1, | that was impressive have u ever thought abut telling ur mum? how u feel and how ur not ur sis? just a thought but it was a sick poem on feeling! keep it up! :) |
| Lemaly Orangeflower 2005-07-31 ch 1, | Very well written. Many of these thoughts have flowed through my mind as well. Sometimes, I just want people to take time and see me for me, instead of treating me so badly. Beautifully written. I like it a lot. The use of capitalised letters really enunciated the points that seemed to matter the most to you. I really enjoyed this. Good work! |