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| Kiea Evergreen 2005-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good! That was good good. That was great! That not a great great, but a great great! I mean a great, good, terrfic, etc. You need to become a singer or at lest write some songs. |
| Calypso Silverhawk 2005-09-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow...*stares awestruck* I didn't know you wrote this...this is very professional, and you should consider doing something with it. Very moving. |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abusei thought it was pretty creative. but there were some parts that didn't make sense. for example: “'Why do these people don't believe" i think it's supposed to be "why don't these people believe"... and the last line: "And he will show you the way that you have in stored." it doesn't really make sense...but everyone makes grammatical errors. ^^ ~happy writing~ |