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| Lines To Time 2005-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseI don't know how you do this-- I held off on reviewing this because I just couldn't think of anything to say. I still can't, but I'm reviewing anyway because the fact that you only have one review listed is criminal. First of all-- what a nice change to know the topic of the poem! :-P Usually I'm lost in a blizzard of beautiful imagery which, though beautiful, obscures the entire point the poem is trying to make. Not so here; you got exactly the right balance between stringing up pretty words, making a point, *and* communicating a mood. That's genius. That's nearly impossible. That's why I hate you forever and ever. This poem was *something*; it *meant* something; it made me feel something, and that means that basically, you are the most genius poet I have ever met and probably ever will meet even if by some miracle I end up meeting T. S. Eliot after I die. And he is one amazing poet. I hate you because ENVY LIEKWOAH but I love you because you can do this, and this is not only completely brilliant but it has a *feeling* behind it and that's the whole point in the first place, isn't it? |
| I can't believe it's over 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abusevery intellectual-(sp) i loved it! keep writing :) |