Aw, that is the perfect balance of loving and angsty(ness?) lol. I loved it a lot!

Sweet, I like the chorus. And I could really connect with the longing of someone. Keep on going!

interesting theme.

This is so cute. I love it.

That's sweet : ) I wish I knew the melody to this song, it sounds like something I would sing in the shower, or a grocery store, or running down the street naked or something. Just one of those songs...good for all occasions.

Shavo

Beautiful and soothing.

wow! this is just so beautiful. love the repetition of 'come a little closer'. thanz so much for all the awesome reviews! great poem here. incredible, well done:-)

this is an awesome song, I totally love the chorus.

Solo.

'just like the sun that never gives up its light' is a really awsome metaphor..or simile..whatever. lol, point is it was a awsome line. Yea, friendships get screwed up all the time. This is really sweet though.

ANNA

This is an awesome song, and I especially loved the chorus. Absolutely beautiful.

Lunchi

This is really good, great job

How beautiful. You have a way with making a song flow, I think it would sound great to something eerie and swaying. I like it alot. My favorite line, " Your eyes and life,

Still lays within me every night,"

Very beautiful thought, when you can close your eyes and see the person you love. Great!

Aw nice piece, I like the chorus. Great song keep up the good work! QueenVixta

This is very touching and thought full in a lot of ways.

beautiful, great song.

really, very sorrowful.

i could almost hear music to it.