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| sanguini 2006-07-22 ch 1,   | great job. you used simple words to elaborate a complicated feeling, and that made things a lot better. thanks for the wonderful review, by the way. ^^ |
| Darkest Angels 2005-10-28 ch 1, | Woah.. awsome poem! crying in the rain isn't something we can control.. but at least it hides the truth.--Darkest Angels |
| Shadow of Oblivion013 2005-09-20 ch 1, | sad, but beautifully done. reminds me of my song "trench coat" a little bit. sometimes you gotta let the tears out, or it will eat away at you. nice job. k/w just,~shadow |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-07-31 ch 1, | Nice emotion; good work. |