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Reviews For: Dreams and Nightmares
Patient Senses 2007-04-30 . chapter 4
such a great story! I remember reading this years ago and I thought it was good, but I just thought it was a one-shot. Today, I was going through old stories I liked and came across this. I'm extremely tired but I just couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. I hope that you update soon. Our story is so original and not like all the "high school" crap people are writing nowadays. Nice job!
IsabellaCat 2007-04-05 . chapter 4
Yay for another chapter!
I love these flashbacks. And I think this particular one has made it clear that Samantha isn't really a victim. In a way, she is, because Jamie seems to be able to seduce her very quickly, but she didn't exactly have any illusions this night. I wish Jamie wasn't such a jerk, but I think I would like him less if he wasn't. Does that even make sense? Hopefully we'll get to see more into him later though.
Update soon! =)
IsabellaCat 2007-03-31 . chapter 3
I'm really glad you've continued this!
Aww I feel really sorry for Dean. And well everyone in the story. I want to not like Jamie but I keep on trying to attribute good characteristics to him. Even though everything he's done so far isn't really good at all.
Chapter 2 was really interesting... It sounds like a flashback, and I really love how you've switched back in Chapter 3 to the timeframe it was in the first chapter. Is it a flashback? Or another character?
Anyway, update soon! =)
Patient Senses 2006-04-13 . chapter 1
So yeah. I absoluetly loved this story. I loved the way you wrote it. And the storyline itself. Perhaps you could keep this story going... :)
Kage Kancho 2006-04-08 . chapter 1
Yikes...I don't like Jamie. He scares me. And I feel really sorry for Dean. He thought he was with a nice girl who would be faithful...that's sad. And poor narrator (never got her name...). Yikes.Kage
Nakor4223 2005-08-25 . chapter 1
I LIKE IT! I half-knew you had it in you! Now you just have to get to it and write all the other stories you've told me about..after homework is done.(for other reviewers, I know "THE AUTHOR" aka Dyo in RL)
SuperCake 2005-08-09 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really excellent. Well done.
IsabellaCat 2005-07-31 . chapter 1
I really liked your style of writing... It painted a beautifully dark picture for me, and you can just really see the conflicting thoughts rush around inside her head. =) Thanks for a great read!
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