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| Mary Clare 2005-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you Mary. I have this poem memorized and I keep it with me always. |
| The Blind Guardian 2005-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseWell, I know someone like this, perhaps in a different sense, but this definately reflects someone I know. It is good. I would comment further, but I see nothing drastic that needs to be fixed. Thank you for the review by the way. |
| simpleplan13 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot because the descriptions are great & the ending isd so sad and well done... i can relate |
| Aslan Israel 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseVery heartfelt and touching. She’ll sit and let her fingers bleedJust to know she’s still alive I like those lines, but I know I've heard them somewhere else before. |