|Reviews for Stream|
| Orual 2/17/06 . chapter 1
Very nice. I've always liked the metaphor of a stream and peace. It reminds me of the song "I've got peace like a river"
| Kelly I 11/16/05 . chapter 1
the way I read this one, I could picture the setting. great visual!-Kelly I
| FictionPressPenName 10/30/05 . chapter 1
Very beautiful. I know I've said this, but the wording in your poems is very well done and the imagery is great. Keep writing!
| blacktearsofinnocence 10/2/05 . chapter 1
another outstanding piece conveying great imagry, wonderful flow, and beautiful rhyme. true talent. great job and keep it up! keep writing forever and always!
| mystique auteur 9/13/05 . chapter 1
Nice imagery! I felt like I was really there as I read it. Awesome job :0)
| KonekOniko 8/14/05 . chapter 1
Something about this piece just tranced me as soon as I started reading it, but there was a satisfying feeling as I finished. It's so calming, yet its deeper then that. I love it, wonderful poem...
Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
| Dying Without Gackt 8/12/05 . chapter 1
I liked the last two lines the most and I really like the line...
"Once more my mind is in turmoil..."
I don't know why. I just liked that line. Nicely done!
| Moonjava 8/10/05 . chapter 1
This one is very pretty to. It's so soothing.
| KwazyKandyPie 8/8/05 . chapter 1
very nice. a pretty poem. i really like it. beautifully described!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| simpleplan13 8/6/05 . chapter 1
beautiful descriptions.. I like it a lot
| Chell-o Bodello 8/3/05 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. I feel so stupid because I can't think of anything else to say! Your poem's THAT good!
| Sorrowful Dreams 8/3/05 . chapter 1
this is really good. love the flow and the rhyme to this...the detail to this and the words are beautiful
| Ethereal October 8/2/05 . chapter 1
Wow...I liked this a lot. There was a wonderful feeling of peace and tranquility, but something deeper and stronger moving under the surface. Awesome job!
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/1/05 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful, graceful - I find it so soothing and tranquil in devotion.
| Thewhitefoxrox 8/1/05 . chapter 1
you're a wonderful poet! I've read your other poems, and I'm proud to have stumbled upon another person who spells colours with a 'u!'Great job! I'm enchanted by your poems!