Very nice. I've always liked the metaphor of a stream and peace. It reminds me of the song "I've got peace like a river"

the way I read this one, I could picture the setting. great visual!-Kelly I

Very beautiful. I know I've said this, but the wording in your poems is very well done and the imagery is great. Keep writing!

another outstanding piece conveying great imagry, wonderful flow, and beautiful rhyme. true talent. great job and keep it up! keep writing forever and always!

davida

Nice imagery! I felt like I was really there as I read it. Awesome job :0)

Something about this piece just tranced me as soon as I started reading it, but there was a satisfying feeling as I finished. It's so calming, yet its deeper then that. I love it, wonderful poem...

Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

I liked the last two lines the most and I really like the line...

"Once more my mind is in turmoil..."

I don't know why. I just liked that line. Nicely done!

This one is very pretty to. It's so soothing.

very nice. a pretty poem. i really like it. beautifully described!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

beautiful descriptions.. I like it a lot

Absolutely beautiful. I feel so stupid because I can't think of anything else to say! Your poem's THAT good!

Lunchi

this is really good. love the flow and the rhyme to this...the detail to this and the words are beautiful

Sorrow

Wow...I liked this a lot. There was a wonderful feeling of peace and tranquility, but something deeper and stronger moving under the surface. Awesome job!

Absolutely beautiful, graceful - I find it so soothing and tranquil in devotion.

you're a wonderful poet! I've read your other poems, and I'm proud to have stumbled upon another person who spells colours with a 'u!'Great job! I'm enchanted by your poems!