Aww nice poem. I like it.

And thank you so much for reviewing my work. Very much appreciated.

Loves-Thorn

I love it. So heartbreaking and loving at the same time.

I like the incoroporation of 'Ren' in bold letters. Sorry but this is the last review I can do for now. I must call our little throw back to an end for a moment. Heh. I'll read more of your stuff, you can bet it.

Awesome! I love it!

Intense, erotic, burning with such a fire I have not known before, bleeding through the past and the present, and the capitalized letters bring together a name... Simply one of your best.

Wow, she sounds cool. Great work man, keep writing. btw thanks for all the review ;)

There's an insane beauty to this piece... something I can't quite place. The imagery is amazing, Wren seems to be amazing, everything is so amazing and amidst it all the poem has a... slow... dreamlike quality. Longing for something long since past. Memories bleeding into today.

Yesterday.

A great poem, though I wish I could explain why.